September 14th, 2006
Tell Me
Posted by Silver in Serious
promise its gonna be all right
promise i wont end up hurting inside
but you cant promise whats not yours to give
you cant wall yourself off and forget to live
sometimes all you can do is wait
hoping and praying for a good break with fate
on September 14th, 2006 at 10:15 pm
this is a good one. Just remember that, certin stuff is not your fault. It’s his. It says in your post “you cant wall yourself off and forget to live” and i disagree. I think that “walling yourself off” from any emotion might be good for certin people. But some emotions are to strong to just forget about…
on September 15th, 2006 at 7:33 pm
I like this post for two reasons, fist it shows that you know how to write a good poem, and second it shows how your trying to tell someone to stay strog and not give up living.
on September 18th, 2006 at 10:36 am
wow. this is really good. it reminds me of something ive read before about a girl taht loves this guy so much that she takes a bullet fo rhim and appologises for bleeding on his shirt then dies……i know thats a bit….of a tangent but thats what it makes me think of. really descriptive. i like it! keep it up mann!
on September 19th, 2006 at 10:24 am
I dont know what that was about, but it sounded really good!!